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by Nan Hawthorne, who also writes under Christopher Hawthorne Moss, Books and Stories b ChristopherHawthorne Moss at http://authorchristophermoss.vlogspot.com



Showing posts with label Refuge in Wales. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Refuge in Wales. Show all posts

Friday, July 24, 2009

Old Stories: Arrival in Wales, Alternate Endings

I appear to have become fascinated by Wales though I don't remember why. Perhaps I had read a novel set in medieval Wales, though the only clue as to which would be the likely date this story was written, somewhere between 1971-3... I think.

Radnor


Lawrence's party accepted Llewellyn's invitation to stay in Radnor without question. All along the ride to Wales there had been far no one would wish to take in so many homeless foreigners. Few, though, in the party spoke Welsh only Lawrence, Lorin and the Irishman, in fact. When the King's interview with ap Cador had finished, the Christenlanders had been escorted to the great hall and the fire. It was a sight to see, three women, for their children's sakes, bustled up close around the fire, three others who stood waiting to warm their hands. Each who were attended had servants striving to help them warm themselves and the children. The men stood off to the west where the table was. Llewellyn stood between Lawrence and Lorin, chattering away about the villa's remains and how he had salvaged much of what could be seen from ruins of an old country home of a Roman Briton. He told them, with much apology, that tonight many of the entourage would have to bedded down in the great Hall. The King and Lorin could have rooms, for a small party of chieftains who normally stayed at court during the summer and autumn had left to guard their sheep because of the early winter. There were a few rooms where they stayed available.

All were well enough satisfied to have any sheltered place to sleep, and were able to rejoice the next morning when they awoke to sunshine and the songs of migrating birds. They were able to prepare themselves for the last stages of their flight - settling in and growing used to their new situations.

Rory's wells was the best so he translated as Llewellyn attempted to explain what kinds of arrangements had to be made. H explained that only Lawrence and Lorin and their families could have rooms. Lachrimae could stay temporarily with a lady who occupied a third room. A fourth, smaller room could be used as a nursery. Those who wished could choose parts of the estate to stay at and still others could have small cottages outside the old Roman wall. Percy and Jocelyn suggested that a hut could be built for them, Ricca could share one of the rooms. Rory said he could sleep in the Great Hall, as minstrels often did. Thus he could speak to those who traveled and et news, and reminisce of his home in Ireland. Samir spoke to ask to bunk in the stables. He said that when it was cold he could come into the Great Hall, but until then he would be near the horses he learned to care for in his youth. Sean an Emily asked for a small cottage, for this is how they chose to live in Christenlande as well.

There was one vacant hut already and Percy and Jocelyn went out to claim it. They had few belongings to make it feel like their own, but Jocelyn was very versatile in converting various items into useful furniture and décor. Sean left Emily to care for the children while he supervised the building of their own small abode.

It was a burden lifted; all those hours of discomfort and worry and sorrow ere converted to the activity of people concentrating on making new memories and places for themselves where those memories would reside.

Perhaps most active was Father Hyperion: he had to wade through the rubble where the oldest wall had been torn down to make the encampment large enough to add a small chapel. This very chapel, in time to come, would be involved in the great division of the Saxon church, denouncing the Celtic brand in favor of Roman Catholicism - but the walls would be crumbled and the remains overgrown long before a profligate king would divide it again in favor of a pretty new wife. Trivial matters often destroyed whole ways of life; centuries-old traditions bow to personal whims.

There was much to be said for the new homes these people set up. Lawrence and the Queen might not view purple velvet, regal designs or luxurious furnishings, but their room was ever as warm and a setting of love as ever. Josephine could smile and be a little pleased that royal matters no longer called Lawrence away from her side-they could spend countless hours alone and with their children. In the fort, Lawrence could no longer enjoy the pomp of his reign, but he also need not fret over this and that political matter.

One more person they were to meet. At the evening meal of mutton, hearty ale and bread, a young lady sat at the table with the household and guests. She seemed not to be a servant. She did not speak, but to Lorin, who spoke politely to her once. They soon learned this dark, mysterious lady was the Prince's paramour, Cairlin.

Floor plan of Randnor's great hall.


Next: Samir and Rory Speak of Love

Thursday, July 23, 2009

Old Stories: Flight from Christenlande, Alternate Ending

Lawrence, Llewellyn ap Cador and Lorin at Radnor


The stories that fall under the collective title of "Refuge in Wales" are the last stories I wrote for decades. I categorize these as "alternate endings" because they were never really part of the original vision. The epilogue in the novel is the "official ending". This series ends with no resolution. That resolution finally came with the new stories, which will come next on this blog, and the novel, which you are most welcome to purchase at Amazon or elsewhere. Just see Shield-wall Books for more information.

Flight from Christenlande

The weather turned to rain and grey and miserable nearly the very moment the Christenlande party reached its frontiers. It was often difficult to tell the difference between the weather and the people along the way. On every turn there were people who were despairing -nearer to the seacoast and the banks of the great rivers people lived in fear of the Vikings; inland where they could not fear these invaders, they found all the security of these last few years cut off with no hope of restoration. For those who recognized the king in flight the defeat was all the more acute.

At first Lawrence tried to stop and give some advice or reassurance to these people but there were too many and their grief was too great.

The party overtook the Queen's retinue many miles to the west, along a great road. When first Josephine had heard the hurried hoof-beats behind, she had feared that outlaws or unfriendly knights were coming, who might molest her party" When she saw it was Lawrence and four of his friends, tears of relief sprung to her eyes. As he rode up to her, she rode to meet him. They greeted with an embrace and she turned her horse to ride up to the head of the retinue.

"Oh, my lord, I feared so for your life!"

They all rode on away until there was a sheltered part of the woods where they could dismount. Lawrence told his wife all that had happened and she grieved with him for all his lost dreams. Once or twice he glanced over at the others. Larissa wept on Loin's shoulder -even he, who had ridden silent and seemingly unperturbed, now showed emotion as he comforted his wife. Samir had gone over to a tree where he sat on the marshy ground and hid his face.

The decision was made to go to Wales. Josephine showed distress at the idea until Lawrence assured her she would never see Lanimere's home. Many of the retinue would go north, some south to seek refuge. All of Lawrence's closest friends, Lorin, Sean, Tramtrist, Rory and their families, and Ricca would go to Wales. Samir would be taken with them. One priest who was Lawrence's confessor, Pr. Priedrich Hyperion, would accompany them. Lachrimae would have to be sent back to Prance to her uncle, le Charles. Lawrence hoped to find sanctuary in the castle of a friend from his Welsh days, Prince Llewellyn a Gador of Radnor.

The rain never let up while they were traveling their southwest journey. Some great relief was to be felt when the stronghold of the prince came into sight. The porter of the gate was confronted, when he answered Clancy's knock, by over twenty sopping, dirty and bedraggled people. He was at first unwilling to let them in.

Despite all Saxon hospitality freeloaders were scrupulously selectively treated. Clancy announced the King of Christenlande, though, and the porter, who cared not to mess with royalty, hurried off to tell his master.

After their rejoicing at the thought of shelter, the tedious moments of waiting seemed to accentuate every ache and pain the riding had brought on. The women fretted about the welfare of their children and, when finally the porter returned, they were, by and large, very happy just to stand in the entrance where they were bidden.

When Owen, the porter, requested Lawrence enter to speak with the prince, Lorin unquestioningly stepped to his side, as Rory stepped to the Queen's side to attend her while the King was absent. They were escorted a short distance in the building, a wood and stone building probably left over from the Romans, It was set up in the wild mountains of Radnor, on the side of a mountain overlooking a valley full of huts and fields. It was a very productive and peaceful looking area, though in truth it was only the latter., The Welsh frontier would never be an agriculturally productive area. But there were herds of sheep all over in clumps of white.

The room they were shown to was a smallish one, though they were to learn it was one of the largest in the building. Its furniture consisted of oaken chests, Roman leather chairs, a table and skins on the floor and walls. At the table sat a tall, sharp-eyed man whose head sported curly red-brown hair. He had a smiling Welsh face and dressed in a blue to match his eyes. He did not stand to greet Lawrence and Lorin but motioned them to chairs.

"Ah, Lawrence, oh days of your stay at Trelane!"

Lawrence smiled and Lorin strained to understand the provincial Welsh.. Llewellyn continued, "ah, what disaster has befallen you and why do you travel so unarmed?" His voice was deep, loud and musical - his whole manner was that of a man in love with life and ready to face anything with courage and a laugh. Lawrence explained the terrible occurrences of the last several weeks.

Llewellyn's smile ceased, but only for a moment, to shine, showing his sympathy. "Ach, that despair of your country can never happen to us here - we are too far from the sea to fear the Danes, and if we weren't, there is nothing we could offer them to steal. We are clanny, we depend not on great kings or dukes but only our prince who knows all the chieftains in our valley" Here, if you will accept my invitation to stay, you will find a sheltered life you have never enjoyed.

Next: Arrival in Wales

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Nan Hawthorne now writes under the name Christopher Hawthorne Moss. You can contact Christopher at christopherhmoss@gmail.com .